Shivani
Avasthi
Greenlee
English
201
1/10/16
Health is described as the balance
of the self, as having all of your biological needs met first and then mental.
Mental health, or the way one experiences the self, is crucial in whether one
can be described as a healthy person. The bodies discussed challenge the idea
that the social acceptance of gender, femininity, and perfection, which represents Patrick
Bateman, is good health; furthermore, bodies such as Roxanne Edwards
demonstrate how individuals can innovate ideas about gender, mental health, femininity,
and perfection thus challenging the status quo.
Patrick Bateman from the movie American Psycho directed by Herron is a
prime example of perfect physical health not equating to good mental and
overall health. One of the first scenes on the movie in Bateman talking to a
bunch of his friends and reprimanding them when they start to say anti-sematic
slurs, this contrasts when he goes to the nightclub with his friends at the
club and getting frustrated at the waitress he asserts, “ You’re a fucking ugly
bitch. I want to stab you to death and play around with your blood.” ( Herron) Interestingly this
insight into how messed up his mental health is done in a very noisy club, a
space where his mental health is hidden by the events going around him. This
demonstrates that even though he may smile and look charming how easily bad
mental health can be hidden and a person can be perceived as healthy.
Furthermore, this is the first instance in Bateman’s character that shows that
acceptable physical appearance is not a sign of a person in good health.
Bateman is the perfect example of
how wanting to achieve perceived normalcy and perfection is harmful to a
person’s mental health. For example he goes through a intense morning routine,
“ [using ] a water activated gel cleanser, then a honey almond body scrub and
on the face an exfoliating gel scrub” (
Herrod). Additionally, later on when Evelyn learns he hates his job and asks, “
Why don’t you just quit” he replies, “ Because I want to fit in” ( Herrod).
These are just a few examples of how much trouble he goes through to come
across as normal. This is his coping mechanism for feeling crazy, and knowing
he is not “ normal”. He is the perfect metaphor for people ignoring and not
embracing their differences and ending up with poor mental health as a result.
Instead of addressing his problems and accepting who he is, he goes overboard
trying to appear normal and healthy- even murdering people who one-up him on
being physically perfect, not saying that cold-blooded murder is ok, but it is
a metaphor for how not embracing your true self means that your overall health
is not good even if the outside exterior is “perfect”. ( Herrod)
Furthermore, society ignoring that
perfect physical health does not mean good overall health is played brilliantly
at the end of the movie, when Bateman’s lawyer does not believe that Bateman
committed all those murders because he is “ good old Bateman” who is always put
together and charming. The lawyer ignores that Bateman is telling the truth,
because Bateman has always yearned for and presented perfection and presented
himself par to the status quo. The character of the lawyer shows how normal
people are willing to overlook things they know for truth because they refuse
to acknowledge how much mental health plays into good health. This becomes the
catalyst for Bateman realizing this exact same thing as he remarks, “ My punishment continues to allude me and I
gain no deeper knowledge of myself” ( Herrod). This is the moment he realizes
how deep he has gone trying to show perfection and trying to be normal, that
now even when he wants to reveal himself he can’t. This serves as a warning to
the audience that a person has to accept themselves the way their mental health
works or end up very broken and miserable and very unhealthy.
In stark contrast, is Roxanne
Edwards in the radio interview “ Roxanne Edwards is Superhuman” by S. Adrian
Massey. She actively goes against what
the status quo for femininity is and actively challenges traditional gender
roles as she boldly declares, “ Femininity isn’t necessarily your breasts” and
that, “ Most women are very strong, but they keep that shit to themselves”.
This shows she refuses to clog up her mentality with the status quo that
there’s only one “right” way to be feminine. She is taking the physical
appearance out of it and uplifting other women instead of looking down on them.
She is helping spread the healthy idea that femininity and women’s strength is
very diverse and encouraging women that they should accept the way that they
themselves define these terms is valid and to accept themselves instead of
pushing it away, in a
short term doing exactly the opposite of Bateman, and being much more
healthy and happier as a result, even though her body does not meet the
socially accepted definition of a healthy body. ( Massey)
She is even challenging the socially
accepted idea that femininity is restricted to one gender as she states:
I know some very unique
looking women, all across the spectrum, and when I say unique looking women I
mean unique women period. Drag queens, transvestites, body builders, you
name it, the whole gamut and they are quite elegant and just amazingly feminine
without having to have not one breast amongst them.
Furthermore, she is challenging the very restrictive social norm
that expression of femininity is only restricted to one gender and rejecting
it. One might think that she gets her idea of femininity from weird places but this
just shows how open her idea of expression of gender and femininity is. It is
drastically different from what the general public assumes to be feminine. She
believes she can be completely ripped and still be feminine, that anyone can be
no matter the gender a person identifies as, biological build does not and
should not restrict how a person chooses to represent themselves. She is
projecting the idea that a person accepting the way their brain processes
concepts such as femininity and gender is a representation of a healthy person
even though it goes against the status quo.
A Body such as Patrick Bateman represents how having a perfect
body does not mean that a person is healthy; in contrast, Roxanne shows that
the way to be healthy is to go against social norms and make your own definition of
“perfection”, and achieve healthiness that way even if it might go against what
society physically deems to be so.
1 comments:
1. The thesis statement is "Health is described as the balance of the self, as having all of your biological needs met first and then mental." Having a balance of physical and mental health is important to obtaining a healthy lifestyle.
2. The thesis makes a debatable assertion. Through out the paper, different aspects of mental and physical health are discussed. There are several quotes used to provide support when discussing these aspects. I think the author could expand a little more in the thesis paragraph and give a little background as to who Patrick Bateman and Roxanne Edwards are.
3. Through to the paper, the two different aspects of health are developed. The author uses each paragraph to set up a different view on mental and physical health and whether or not the example supports or denies a healthy lifestyle. I think more development in the thesis paragraph would benefit the paper, giving background and a preview into what will be discussed through out the paper. Furthermore, I think the conclusion can be expanded. Rather than just restating what is in the thesis, maybe introducing a new idea that wasn't developed in the essay or introducing an interesting quote.
4. The author discussed several different aspect of their examples either supporting or denying good mental and physical health as the paper developed. I am convinced. There were several different examples through out the paper that supported the thesis. I would like to see the thesis paragraph and conclusion expanded more.
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